10
Sep

I think I’m in love

   Posted by: WhiRL   in Discussion, Music

A prose I wrote early this morning

Prose: is writing that resembles everyday speech.

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I think I’m in love,

I really really think I’m in love,

I thought I could love,

But history says otherwise,

So I think I’m in love,

But I will never be able to love or be loved.

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It feels like life is worth living when I see your face,

My heart beats a different tune, a sound that is just so unfazed,

You represent all the beauty of life and brought meaning to a world that is messed up

Yet I feel so happy, yet I feel so sad.

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I wish you all the happiness that life could offer

I wish you all the the joy

I can offer no such moments

I can only offer you my heart

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I think I’m in love

Oh I think I’m in love

With You

Then I sent it to someone just to find out an opinion and it became a song….should I attempt to put a melody to this?? :

V1
I think I’m in love,
I really really think I’m in love,
I thought that I could love…
Though history say otherwise

* Chorus
So I think I’m in love,
Never been able to love or be loved.
Yet it feels like life
Is worth living when I see… Your Face

V2:
I feel so happy
I feel so sad
(All) the moments of joy
(All) the happiness that life could bring

V3
I offer no such moments
Only offer You my heart
It beats to a different tune …
You’re the beauty of my life
You’re the meaning to my world
A sound that is so unchanging…

(Back to Chorus)

Bridge 2:
I cannot offer such moments
I can only offer my heart…
In a world that is messed up

Oh I feel so happy
I feel so sad

* Chorus 2
So I know I’m in love,
Never been able to love or be loved.
Yet it feels like life
Is worth living when I see… Your Face

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So I know I’m in love
Oh I know I’m in love ..with You

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12 comments so far

nancy
 1 

Yes…put a melody in and sing for us.

Leon said:

Ok 1 vote so far….

September 10th, 2008 at 11:56 am
meiyen@sarah
 2 

Yup the words are very meaningful just like that on its own. Putting in a melody would bring it out even more :-)

Leon said:

I will do that only probably next month as I am so rushed now. But if there are enough votes, i will do it!

September 10th, 2008 at 9:21 pm
nancy
 3 

ok, then i will come back again and again to vote! :P

p/s sarah, help me out here!

Leon said:

THis is not fair

September 11th, 2008 at 12:31 am
Walltalker
 4 

COunt me in on a vote to turn it into a song!

Leon said:

Hmmm ok ok yours is accepted only this time :P

September 11th, 2008 at 1:01 pm
nancy
 5 

Great Warwick!

I am back for another vote! :P

Leon said:

If you have three persons to support you I will consider this vote hahahah

September 11th, 2008 at 6:32 pm
meiyen@sarah
 6 

Yes yes sis Nancy …I’m back !! DOuble vote here !! Come on Warwick vote somemore…heehee forgot to ask same person vote many times also counted right Leon ?
We insist it be counted !! ( Right sis Nancy ) ? :-)

Leon said:

Haha you are so polite keep calling her sister nancy….why don’t call me brother Leon?

September 11th, 2008 at 10:13 pm
PC
 7 

Sound a bit too teenager if i ask me ;P
anyway thats just my opinion hahaha..

Leon said:

I know but if you realise it is a prose, meant to sound plain and simple. I was thinking of doing a jazz ballad out of this. It gives me the ‘almost like being in love’ song feel don’t you think?

September 12th, 2008 at 10:52 am
MikeLeo
 8 

I will give you a vote and vote Nancy for her second vote if you improve on your chorus.

I think you chorus is not “umph” enuf and I know you can do better than this.

Leon said:

Its not supposed to be ooommphhh feel leh.

September 12th, 2008 at 10:53 am
blossom
 9 

Yes! Yes! Yes! Leon pls put a melody to this n sing it for us!

Leon said:

So still only 5 votes out of 6 billion people.

September 12th, 2008 at 11:40 am
nancy
 10 

one vote is worth one billion people’s vote leh. :P

so put the melody in la.

Leon said:

If only my one dollar was worth one billion dollars

September 12th, 2008 at 6:45 pm
princ3zz
 11 

does mine count?

Leon said:

Of course it does! But not as a billion votes :)

September 15th, 2008 at 1:08 am
PC
 12 

If u gonna make it as jazz ballad then it should sound better ..i was thinking of “Britney Spear Pop” uhhhh…hahaha..

Leon said:

Oops I did it again….:P

September 15th, 2008 at 10:18 am

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